I really don’t like to write bad reviews, especially not for a debut book written by a young indie author, but sadly I cannot give it more than two stars. The story had such a great premise, and the cover was so gorgeous, but unfortunately the execution didn’t meet any of my expectations.
I truly wanted to love this story. An ownvoices story about a gay Jewish boy who has to return to the closet when he moves to a small town in Florida, who meets a religious, popular football quarterback, who is suppressing all feelings that could remotely be seen as a sin, but who loves anything different, sounded absolutely amazing.
But sadly, this book just didn’t feel ready to be published. Not just because of all the editing errors (like repetitive words, unfinished thoughts or phrases that didn’t make sense, wrong names on characters etc.) but also the pacing felt off. There was so much going on that the story felt rushed and unfocused, with many of the important plot events being brushed over and told in hindsight by the characters thinking of them, not by us readers experiencing them, which made it hard to be fully invested in the story.
The plot also reminded me a bit too much of Autuboyography by Christina Lauren to feel unique and fresh, and the characters had so much potential, but weren’t as fully developed as I’d wished for.
I feel really sad for this, but hope that Jacob Gelman will continue writing stories. He’s obviously a very talented writer, and I hope he’ll get a good editor for the next book, who can help him achieve his full potential.
I received a free ARC of this book, which I have voluntarily reviewed.
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